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Walking under a clear night sky,
Beneath all of the stars,
A war tears through my soul
Transforming me into the God Mars.

My anger surges forth,
As I strike down my foe,
I drop to a knee
Under the force of a mighty blow.

I strike again,
Rending his heart from his chest,
I reel back in agony...
Taking a moment to rest.

Suddenly reality sets in
And again I fall to a knee,
The realization that the enemy
Has always been me.
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Mood: Joy ~pershingkitty Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh wow that's awesome!! Wicked poem!!
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Mood: Love ~AFieldOfDreams Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Woah. :O Powerful much?
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~dragonlily29 Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love your poems c: they are amazing
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~dragonlily29 Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome^^
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~johnthedragon Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
:iconshockplz: So Awesome!
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~TheSword-TheFaith Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done, My friend.
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~CheryMiste Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
Hey nice work. :)
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Mood: Love ~iSherie Jul 24, 2012  Student
This is amazing. ^.^
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~DemonGirl2010 Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
that is really good! love it.
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