Walking under a clear night sky,
Beneath all of the stars,
A war tears through my soul
Transforming me into the God Mars.
My anger surges forth,
As I strike down my foe,
I drop to a knee
Under the force of a mighty blow.
I strike again,
Rending his heart from his chest,
I reel back in agony...
Taking a moment to rest.
Suddenly reality sets in
And again I fall to a knee,
The realization that the enemy
Has always been me.
Oh wow that's awesome!! Wicked poem!!
Woah. Powerful much?
I love your poems c: they are amazing
Well done, My friend.
Hey nice work.
This is amazing. ^.^
that is really good! love it.
Wow just wow
this is so true and very well written.
...so, so true...I love the way you write.
really good. you should write more.
this is really good...wow..when i read it i thought you were describing me...