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Walking under a clear night sky,
Beneath all of the stars,
A war tears through my soul
Transforming me into the God Mars.

My anger surges forth,
As I strike down my foe,
I drop to a knee
Under the force of a mighty blow.

I strike again,
Rending his heart from his chest,
I reel back in agony...
Taking a moment to rest.

Suddenly reality sets in
And again I fall to a knee,
The realization that the enemy
Has always been me.
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The Battleby VisionWars

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2012-2014 VisionWars
07/12/12
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pershingkitty Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow that's awesome!! Wicked poem!!
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AFieldOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Woah. :O Powerful much?
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dragonlily29 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love your poems c: they are amazing
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Thanks :)
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dragonlily29 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome^^
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johnthedragon Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
:iconshockplz: So Awesome!
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TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done, My friend.
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CheryMiste Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
Hey nice work. :)
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iSherie Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student
This is amazing. ^.^
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DemonGirl2010 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
that is really good! love it.
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