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Love
Nothing but a lie
Loneliness
Forever until you die

Emptiness
Always fills your soul
Heart
Never to be whole

Depression
Saturating your mind
Hope
Not a glimmer to find

Despair
In your stare
Hell
... You're already there.
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Hell by VisionWars

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08/02/12
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pershingkitty Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem I could see being a song, something you might hear in a metal band.
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Thanks
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AFieldOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
How do you think of these things?! You are one of my favorite poets on here ;)
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
It all comes from emotion... when i'm depressed, i write.
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AFieldOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww don't be depressed :(
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
lol Sorry, but you asked.
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Nicely done.
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alexandria97 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Damn dude! You hit the nail on the head with this! I agree!
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vampiricdemoncutie Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
these poems kimda seem sad :(
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ViollaChan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
8O!!!
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HimeChie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love it <3
You really have one very great talent, my dear friend ♥ :3
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MoonlightOrchids Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love this! :D
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NeekaNeko Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Professional Photographer
Woah, super good :D
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TheUnseeneGirl Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is really really good.
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Ezramalia Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Once again...its wonderfully heartbreaking.
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xxRyRa5bbit Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Simple yet powerful and insightful ;D hey cutie! Sry I haven't talked to you in awhile :( been busy, how ya been? I miss you :( <33
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Savingsoul Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love this!!
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LeeLee-x3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Almost seems simple, but it's so deep! I love it. (:
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Jess4ever Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
do u ever perform ur poems infront of people? They're really good =D
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ashleerosaria Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Photographer
okay..again...freakin amazing.
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