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Love
Nothing but a lie
Loneliness
Forever until you die

Emptiness
Always fills your soul
Heart
Never to be whole

Depression
Saturating your mind
Hope
Not a glimmer to find

Despair
In your stare
Hell
... You're already there.
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Hellby VisionWars

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2012-2014 VisionWars
08/02/12
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pershingkitty Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem I could see being a song, something you might hear in a metal band.
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Thanks
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AFieldOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
How do you think of these things?! You are one of my favorite poets on here ;)
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
It all comes from emotion... when i'm depressed, i write.
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AFieldOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww don't be depressed :(
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VisionWars Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
lol Sorry, but you asked.
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Nicely done.
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alexandria97 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Damn dude! You hit the nail on the head with this! I agree!
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vampiricdemoncutie Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
these poems kimda seem sad :(
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ViollaChan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
8O!!!
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